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| Debate |
| Advisor : DEBATE03|
|2005-01-14 오후 |
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vAlign=top width=550 colSpan=2>Hello,
Hyung Sub is a very diligent and
dedicated student. I am very proud of the preparation work for the first
practice debating session that he has done. At present, he has finished giving
his opening speech for the negative side of the debate topic on school uniforms.
I gave him full points (25/25) for his clear articulation of his team's position
on the debating topic; a commendable score (21/25) for his non-overlapping
arguments for his list of arguments (i.e.- main reasons) supporting his team's
position; a full score (20/20) for not making the mistake of being too detailed;
and a decent score (22/30) for the loudness and clarity of his English. The
total, then, was an 88/100.
Please note that Hyung Sub needs to be a little
more focused with not overlapping with his arguments. In another words, Hyung
Sub gave 3 arguments why he felt that Korean schools should sustain its school
1) Uniforms can stifle individuality;
2) Uniforms can
cause humiliation; and
3) Uniforms can have a bad effect on
Indeed, arguments #1 & 2 do not overlap, but argument #3 is
too broad to the extent of unnecessarily encompassing the first 2 arguments.
There is, then, a definite overlap here. As far as his English is concerned,
Hyung Sub gives the loudest and clearest presentation thus far. Most of the
students have scored a 5-8/30 in their English abilities.
Hyung Sub, then, is
doing a really great job thus far!
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